Hello clouseau,
Please answer the question:
   Would the new explanations have any impact on your views?

http://www.geocities.com/emailerss/

5 stars grntd

Hello again,

Thanks for asking for my opinion.

I looked once again at your page, and though I do lean toward other
products, I tried to be open minded and objective.

I find your page does not intrigue me to learn more about the product.
The page does not market you product well, in my opinion, and the
images are not of sufficient resolution nor photographed in such a
manner as to show off the product effectively.

I feel the immense amount of text, many fonts and perhaps not well
chosen fonts and long instruction set on the first page detract from
grabbing the attention of your viewer and potential customer.

A professionally done page may well increase the odds of your products
success and I would recommend that approach.

Regards,

-=clouseau=-

Thank you for your good advice and help, clouseau-ga.

Best regards,
g