Hello Solari,
here are my suggestions:
Real Estate, Real Easy
--> Catchy.
Deal Settled
--> Emphasizes the speed of your service.
"Settled" associates settling down to a new home.
Don't Let Them Wait
--> Others do that already.
Emphasizing why you, not them.
For Sale For Sure
--> It's a risk-free investment. No doubt about it.
Meet Your Buyer
--> The customer is waiting around the corner.
You will make the connection.
Humorous association ("Meet Your Maker").
We'll Get Your Money
--> Slightly ironic.
Let's Hit Home
--> Simple.
The Home Helpers
--> Easy & friendly.
The Property Transferrers
--> Original, professional.
Make Sure They Find Yours
--> If not for you, they'd never sell.
Let's Put Your Roof Over Their Head
--> Personal. Attracts attention.
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Request for Answer Clarification by
solari-ga
on
13 Jun 2002 07:26 PDT
It's a start, but not what we're looking for. My original question
is:
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Our angle is that we're going to provide exceptional service and
materials above and beyond what the normal FSBO offers them. We need
to come up with a killer slogan that will convey this in one short
sentence.
Think about it from the customer (homeseller) perspective... How can
our slogan immediately convey that we're better and above all the
other FSBOs out there?
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In other words, we are looking for a slogan that will make it evident
that we will provide exceptional service and materials above and
beyond what the normal FSBO does. The slogans you offered are okay but
they don't convey what I am asking for. It needs to convey the
benefit outright rather than be subtle or cute about it, if you know
what I mean.
I also said I preferred that a branding or marketing expert answer
this. Should I retract this and post again? Let me know. Thanks.
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Clarification of Answer by
j_philipp-ga
on
13 Jun 2002 07:48 PDT
Hello Solari,
could you please give me more details on why your services are above
and beyond what others have to offer? This would help further
investigating a brand for the benefits of what you have to offer.
Would you say the fact that it's online should be emphasized as
competitive factor?
Thanks.
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Clarification of Answer by
j_philipp-ga
on
13 Jun 2002 10:25 PDT
Hello again Solari,
Here's the list I compiled after further analyzing your request. This
time, I made sure to put special emphasis on the customer perspective
by pointing out your special edge in the competition:
Others Play. We Score the Home Run.
--> Clearly pointing out why you should be chosen.
Double-meaning of "home run".
Posted. Sold. Painless.
--> Other companies make it too complicated.
They Sell Houses. We Sell Dreams.
--> More them vs you.
'Cause We're the Experts
--> While others clearly aren't.
All That and More
--> You got what others have, plus special benefits.
Home of Extra Value
--> For that special bonus.
Customer, Meet House
--> It's so easy when they chose you.
#1 in FSBO
--> And now you got the attention others wanted.
No Safer Way to Make Them Pay
--> With possible money-back guarantee.
Others can't compete.
The Connection Factory
--> Others don't know the right people.
You're the one with the connections.
Big Buyers Watching You
--> You got the customers already.
Others are running behind.
Orwellian reference, extra sticky.
Hope that's more like it!
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