Please also let me know spelling mistakes or grammer ... 
Also tell me what kind of paper i should choose to print ... 
Thanks a lot ... 

STATEMENT OF PURPOSE

As an applicant to XXX school ,xxx city in a Graduate program( EE), I
am very glad to have an opportunity in introducing my study objectives
to you.

In my journey of xx years in the field of Electrical Enginneering I
got a good knowledge & strong background in microelectronics & VLSI
Design, Analog & Digital Circuit Design, Microprocessors, Linear &
Analog integrated circuits, Computer Organisation.

I did my bachelor of technology at xxxxxxx in ELECTRONICS &
COMMUNICATION ENGG. which is considered to be the best institute in
xxx. Before that I did 3-year full time diploma course in Electronics
& Communication Engg. at xxx. During Final year of my Bachelor's
Degree i took 'Microelectronics & VLSI Design' as an elective subject.
Hence I fallen in love with the subject. I enjoy working with the
circuits and I would love to work in this wonderful field.

I taught students of BSEE for x years as lecturer in an Engineering
school( xxx) xxx . An intense and multi-pronged desire to delve more
deeply into VLSI field, I took 'MICROELECTRONICS & ICs' as my teching
subject.Being a faculty member of electronics & communication engg
department at engineering school(xxx), various technical contests &
Quizes were organised under the guidence of me. I have a good
mathematical background too. I was amongst the top 10% of 50
candidates and I am having GPA 3.88.

In addition of my knowledge I am versed with languages such as C, C++,
Java, Web designing concepts. I am capable of working in both DOS and
WINDOWS environments which would help me to put forth my ideas
effectively.

 

I am very much interested in specializing myself in the field of
Integrated Electronics, focusing on VLSI Circuits and Design. I want
to continue teaching as my profession. I believe that only an
intensive study and comprehensive research work in my field of
interest would put me on the right track to achieve my ultimate goal.I
appreciate the amount of challenge and innovation involved in it.

 

How I could achieve my goals at xx university , xx  ? The good
reputation of the university in xx state and opportunity to take some
courses online through its Distance Education xx, attract me being a
mother of small baby. The well-qualified and experienced faculty,
excellent laboratory facilities, exceptional research work and the
inspiration given to students at your university would provide me with
an ideal platform for achieving my goals. I look upon the graduate
program in your department as an avenue to hone my skills and to help
me reach the culmination of my scientific career.

I assure you that I would keep up my diligence and good demeanor
during the course. I hope you find my purpose definitive and I fit in
to your image of a promising student. I look forward to prove myself.

Greetings Unclejohn:

I did not change the spelling of "organisation" and "organised" to the
American "organization" and "organized" as I am assuming you are
applying to a British-based university.  However, if you are applying
to an American university, I suggest you use the American spelling of
"organization" and "organized".

I have made minor edits and corrected the typo errors, and the
corrected text is below.  Thank you for the opportunity to be of
assistance and I wish you speedy entrance to your university of
choice!  :)

Best regards,
journalist-ga

No Search Strategy: editing only


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As an applicant to XXX school in your Graduate program (EE), I am
pleased to have this opportunity to introduce my study objectives to
you.
 
In my journey of xx years in the field of Electrical Engineering, I
received excellent training and a strong background in
Microelectronics and VLSI Design, Analog and Digital Circuit Design,
Microprocessors, Linear and Analog Integrated Circuits, and Computer
Organisation.
 
I earned my Bachelor of Technology at xxxxxxx, a university considered
to be the best institute in the field of Electronics and Communication
Engineering.  Prior to that, I completed a three-year full-time
diploma course in Electronics and Communication Engineering at xxx.
During the final year of my Bachelor's degree, I studied
Microelectronics and VLSI Design as an elective and I fell in love
with the subject. I enjoy working with circuitry and I wish to
continue in this exciting field.
 
As a lecturer at the engineering school xxx, I taught students of BSEE
for xx years.  Possessing an intense and multi-pronged desire to delve
more deeply into VLSI field, I chose Microelectronics and ICs as my
teaching subjects.  As a faculty member of the Electronics and
Communication Engineering department at xxx, various technical
contests and quizzes were organised under my guidance as I have a
solid mathematical background.  My GPA was 3.88 and I was among the
top 10 percent of 50 xxx candidates.
 
In addition to my knowledge, I am well-versed in programming languages
such as C, C++, Java and web design concepts. I am capable of working
in both DOS and Windows environments and both assist me in effectively
bringing my ideas to fruition.
   
I am very much interested in specializing in the field of Integrated
Electronics as well as focusing on VLSI Circuits and Design. I want to
continue teaching as my profession and I believe that only an
intensive study coupled with comprehensive research work in my field
of interest will put me on the right track to achieving my career
goals.
   
How will I achieve my goals at xx university, xx?  As the mother of a
small child, I believe that the good reputation of XX University in xx
and the opportunity to participate in online study through its
Distance Education xx is a wise choice.  The well-qualified and
experienced faculty, excellent laboratory facilities, exceptional
research work and the support and inspiration extended to XX’s
students will provide me with an ideal platform for achieving my
goals. I look upon the graduate program in your department as an
avenue to further hone my skills and to help me reach the culmination
of my scientific career.
 
I assure you that I will keep up my diligence and good demeanor during
my studies at xxx. I hope you find my purposes definitive and my
qualifications in line with your image of a promising student.  I look
forward to beginning my studies at xxx.

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Clarification of Answer by journalist-ga on 06 Oct 2003 14:09 PDT

By the way, I believe your objectives are well-stated.  It appears to
be a comprehensive letter with pertinent references.

Best regards,
journalist-ga