Are there spelling or grammer errors in this paper?
I am not picky, I have never rated anyone with less then 5-stars, I
just really need help on this. All I really need is a corrected paper,
but any tips you could give me would be great.




Different thoughts and opinions are a natural thing in human beings.
Everybody goes through a disagreement with a friend, boyfriend,
girlfriend, husbands and wives, even coworkers and bosses.
           I was working at Dillard?s as a salesperson. Being a sales
person was not the job that I want it to do the rest of my life but I
did enjoy it.
            On Monday 01/03/04 I was helping a customer matching a
shirt and a tie that he was going to wear for his job interview. Out
of nowhere, this lady approached me, and I could see the fake smile on
her face and I knew that she was about to ask me for a favor.
            Her name is Cindy Williams and she is my manager. A moody
fake person. She started telling me about the displays of dress shirts
and ties, and that it needed to be changed and she meant the whole
department and it?s the size of a basketball court. Cindy said that
like its not a big deal, an easy job.
            It took us several weeks to get the job done; I remember
everyday in those weeks was a nightmare for me. After those several
weeks we had the mission accomplished, and truly I liked how the new
display looked. Even my customers liked how it was, and there were
telling me what a great job we did, and for a second I thought that
Cindy Williams made a good decision, and it did surprise me.
 Two days later, I was at work counting my register, doing my normal
job. Here she was again approaching me with that fake smile on her
face. And I was about to tell her that how the customers loved the new
look for the department and she interrupted me by telling me that the
store manager want us to change the displays again. I was shocked and
disappointed. I didn?t even try to convince them into keeping it the
way it was because I knew it?s useless no matter how hard I try. I
hated that job so much and I decided to quit. The next day is Thursday
and it?s my day off. But I didn?t know that I was on the schedule. So
they had it recorded as a no show on my record.
            Friday at noon I show up to work. I started on my project
couple hours go by and here was Cindy again approaching me, and I
asked my self ?now what?? she asked me to walk with her to Sean?s
office (the operation manager), I asked her for the reason she wont
tell me the reason, I didn?t have a good feeling about it. as we walk
through the door Sean was working on the computer he saw me walk in
and told to have a seat and wait. After five minutes of a silent time
he gave a paper to sign and I asked him what was that paper Sean told
me its your termination paper. I didn?t even ask for what was the
reason was because I just had enough from that place. I signed it then
I went home.

Hi Jack,

hhmmm .. can't comment on the content message, but sounds typical retail industry.

Re the Grammar .. in your headline .. it's spelt with an "a" not an "e".

Phil

The info that I though could be changed is in parthesis.  I did notice
a lot of run on sentences and a few miss wordings.  Hope this helps.


Different thoughts and opinions are a natural thing in human beings.
Everybody goes through a disagreement with a friend, boyfriend,
girlfriend, husbands and wives, even coworkers and bosses.
           I was working at Dillard?s as a salesperson. Being a sales
person was not the job that I want(ed) to do the rest of my life but I
did enjoy it.
            On Monday 01/03/04 I was helping a customer match(take
away ing...match) a
shirt and a tie that he was going to wear for his job interview. Out
of nowhere(remove ,) this lady approached me(remove ,) and I could see
the fake smile on
her face (as I new) that she was about to ask me for a favor.
            Her name is Cindy Williams and she is my manager. A moody
fake person. She started telling me about the displays of dress shirts
and ties, and that it needed to be changed(.) (Remove...and) (S)he meant the whole
department and it?s the size of a basketball court. Cindy said that
(remove...like) it(')s not a big deal, an easy job.
            It took us several weeks to get the job done(.) I remember
(remove...everyday in) those weeks (were) a nightmare for me. After
(remove...those) several
weeks we had the mission accomplished, and (I truly) liked how the new
display looked. Even my customers liked how it was(.)They were
telling me what a great job we did, and for a second I thought that
Cindy Williams made a good decision(.) It surprised me.
 Two days later, I was (remove...at work) counting my register, doing my normal
(routine). Here she was again approaching me with that fake smile on her
face. (Remove...And) I was about to tell her (remover...that) how the
customers loved the new
look for the department and she interrupted me by (saying that) that the
store manager want us to change the displays again. I was shocked and
disappointed. I didn?t even try to convince (her)into keeping it the
way it was because I knew it?s useless no matter how hard I try. 

I hated (the) job so much (that) I decided to quit. The next day
(was..this story is past tense) Thursday
and it was my day off. (Yet,) I didn?t know that I was on the schedule. So
they had it recorded as a no show on my record.
            Friday at noon I show up to work. I started on my project (and a)
couple hours go by(.) Here was Cindy again approaching me(.) I
asked my self ?now what??(.) She asked me to walk with her to Sean's,
(the operation manager (no parthesis), office. I asked her for the
reason(, but she would not) tell me the reason(.) I didn?t have a good
feeling about it. (A)s we walk
through the door(,) Sean was working on (his)computer(.) He saw me walk in
and told to have a seat and wait. After five minutes of (silence,)
he (handed me)a (piece of)paper to sign(.) I asked him what (the)
paper (was regarding.) Sean told
me (that is was my) termination paper(work). I didn?t even ask  the
reason because I had enough from that place. I signed it then
 went home.