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     My family has many pets, and among them are two dogs, Champ and
Jasmine. Champ is a Dachshund and Jasmine is a Golden Retriever. There
are many differences between these two dogs, in breed and in the way
these two animals respond to their environment.
    The bodies of these two breeds are very different. Champ?s hair is
very short and reddish. This is fine in the summer, but sometimes he
shivers on cold winter nights. Jasmine on the other hand, has long
flowing blonde hair and is more suitable for living in the outdoors.
She copes with the seasonal changes of Kansas seemingly unaffected.
Another way their bodies are different is in size. The Dachshund has a
very small, but has a long body with really short legs, while the
Golden Retriever on the other hand, is tall and has longer legs. Their
barks also sound different, and coincide with their size. Jasmine has
very loud volume with deep a bark, while Champ has just a little less
volume with a more shrill yapping bark.
    Another important difference between these two breeds is the
health problems that their history tells us they could experience. The
Dachshund typically can have back problems and Golden Retriever
typically experiences hip problems. This is probably a result of their
large frames and various genetic attributes. Another distinct
difference is the temperament of these two dogs. Jasmine is a very
lovable, ?laid-back? dog. For example, when she meets someone for the
first time, she will typically just set and stare at them for a while.
Champ on the other hand, gets very excited and runs and jumps when
first meeting someone.
    Another contrast between these two dogs is how they interact with
each other. Jasmine usually will not initiate any type of ?playing?.
Champ on the other hand, normally does initiate the ?playing.? He
usually will snap at Jasmine, which forces her to retaliate. Actually
Jasmine, being a much bigger dog, gets control very easily and Champ
will shrink back, trying to twist his body around to get away. Another
characteristic these dogs exhibit relates to chewing. While Jasmine
does not normally chew on things a lot, Champ on the other hand does.
In one case Champ chewed up a pillow that was left out on the patio.
    There is also a considerable difference in the way that these two
animals act towards other animals. Jasmine will usually bark once and
run over to another dog. At that point she will then stop and see how
the other dog responds to her. If the dog is aggressive, Jasmine will
usually back down and cower in fear, but Champ on the hand, starts out
aggressive and will not back down. I think this demonstrates the
?hound? in Champ. He responds the same way with most all animals. For
instance, Champ has caught several animals and it seems he carries
them around just to prove his worth. In contrast, Jasmine will not
chase or dig for animals, but she does run and retrieve objects that
someone throws in the yard. This is obviously the retriever in her.
    Finally, Champ and Jasmine respond to training differently.
Jasmine, the Golden Retriever, typically learns very, very quickly,
whereas Champ, the Dachshund, rarely learns anything without spending
a lot of time and repetitive exercises.
    Even though Champ and Jasmine share the same living space and have
grown-up together for the last few years, there are still many unique
differences between the two dogs. While they are both very different
spirits with very different character, they are a joy to have around
and share love with.