EssayEdge.com, a subsidiary of CyberEdit, provides an excellent
framework for developing essays of this type. I will provide an
overview of important steps in the process, along with links to
relevant portions of their essay writing course. At the time I am
writing this, the course is down for maintenance, so I am providing
links to the course through the Internet Archive Wayback Machine at
www.archive.org. To access the pages directly once they are back
online, simply select the portion of the link beginning with
www.essayedge.com through its end and paste it into the Address bar of
your browser.
The goal of this type of essay question is for the reader to gain an
understanding of your personality and traits. In order to answer it
successfully, you must go through a process of self-discovery to
identify who you are and what makes you unique. The page "Assess
Yourself" http://web.archive.org/web/20041012190546/www.essayedge.com/college/essayadvice/course/lo_assess.shtml
provides some techniques to help you answer this question. One
technique that can be extremely effective is to ask your friends and
relatives what makes you unique or unusual. A second technique is to
identify issues in your life that you feel strongly about -- think
about why these issues are important to you and how you feel about
them. Another approach is to think about what you have accomplished
in your life so far; it need not necessarily be extremely important,
but everyone has some unique life experiences and skills. Finally,
have you had contact with someone who has influenced you in some way
that has made you unique? These approaches can prepare you to enter
the brainstorming process to develop a topic.
"Brainstorming a Topic"
http://web.archive.org/web/20041012194027/www.essayedge.com/college/essayadvice/course/lo_brainstorming.shtml
provides an extensive list of questions that you can answer to help
you come up with topics. Your answers will undoubtedly help you
discover what makes you unique. Some combination of your personal
capabilities, family background, accomplishments, and goals for your
life undoubtedly makes you unique and therefore interesting to the
reader.
Once you have identified several potential topics, you are ready to
identify the specific one you will write about. "Selecting a Topic"
http://web.archive.org/web/20041010094640/www.essayedge.com/college/essayadvice/course/lo_topicselection.shtml
provides advice for culling your list of topics down to the best one
for your essay. You want to select a topic that is interesting, gives
a complete picture of you, and, if this is a college application
essay, avoids negativity.
The remaining lessons in the Essay Help Course, available at
"Admissions Essay 101"
http://web.archive.org/web/20041011142524/www.essayedge.com/college/essayadvice/course/,
will help you to structure your essay. A few important points,
particularly considering that the essay will not be very long. It is
important that the introduction be fairly short, immediately grab the
reader's attention, and not be purely a summary of the essay. It does
need to provide the reader with an indication of how you are going to
address the question. You should use active voice, avoid wordiness,
and provide specific examples to support the argument you are making
in the body of the essay. Avoid overly lengthy sentences, and employ
a variety of sentence structures. Because you have relatively few
words to work with, each one needs to count. Again, because the essay
is short, the conclusion does not need to be a summary, but should
instead bring closure to the essay. Finally, as is the case with any
writing, you should carefully proofread for grammatical, spelling, and
typographical errors.
I hope the links and commentary I have provided will assist you in
writing your essay. I would be happy to provide you with a detailed
critique and edit of your essay once you have written it if you would
post it to Google Answers as a new question with "Wonko" in the title.
I have edited several hundred college application essays.
Sincerely,
Wonko |