Dear Friends, 

Greetings! 

I'm wondering if my autobiography can be grammatically and
contextually double-checked before submitted to the job interviewers.

I'm immensely grateful if you can help. Thank you. 
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1. Professional Language Abilities 
It's my great honor to introduce myself here. At first, I attend XXX
University and going to graduate from college on June of this year. In
this April, I had participated in TOEIC simulated examination in
college and gained the 845 points to pass the graduation threshold of
730 points. However, I continually improve my English ability and
truly believe that excellent foreign language is the foundation of
rapidly absorbing other professional knowledge. Furthermore, I also
took one-year Japanese course to develop other foreign languages and
even planned a backpack travel in Tokyo for five days in order to
practice conversation and experience local culture. ?

2. Active Learning Attitude 
During the university, I joined the International Association for
Student in Economics and Management (AIESEC) to expand my
international perspectives. This organization is devoted to
cultivating talented individuals and promoting international exchange.
In 2003, I was selected to present Taiwan to receive International
students who come from Australia, New Zealand, Denmark and Holland. In
2004, I applied American internship program for three months to learn
the working experience of other country. After class, I often audit
other commercial courses related to management, finance as well as
marking. I also subscribe CAREER and CHEER magazine to renew business
knowledge. ?

3. Good Social Contact and Management 
I have been served as the director of the guitar corporation activity
to assist nearly 50 newcomers to familiar with the orientation. The
position promoted not only communication skills but the ability of
management as well. I deeply realize the importance of teamwork to an
efficient organization. Besides, I have been worked in Starbucks and
was select outstanding employees. I love to serve people and was good
at interacting with customers. ?

4. Great Ambition and Goals 
I do believe that the above education background and work experience 
will be of great assistance to me in applying AAA Company's MISE program. 
I believe that I will be able to employ my linguistic language plus my
efficient learning and strong ambition to complete the program
smoothly and become an outstanding employee. In the future, I am eager
to devote myself
to the AAA company and create great contributions. 

Dear executives: I am applying with a sincere and determined heart. I
look very forward to attending your program and to transferring to
overseas companies. Finally, I would like to thank you for reviewing
my resume and thanks for your time.

P.S. I would love to work by the day of July 1. 

Sincerely yours,

James,

Are you applying for a job that requires special language skills?  If
so, you must let your prospective employer have a true picture of your
abilities.  If someone corrects your grammar and word usage, it would
be a misrepresentation of your qualifications.  I am sure that a
person with a sincere and determined heart would not want to deceive a
future employer.

If you are not applying for a job with strong linguistic requirements,
it is probably all right if your command of English is not that of a
native speaker.

As a professional editor, I would estimate that I'd have to spend at
least an hour working with your text.  You might want to consider this
point in pricing your question.

However, I am not a researcher and am not offering to do the work.

Good luck,
Archae0pteryx