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24 Aug 2005 20:54 PDT
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Question ID: 560091
What is wrong with the following sentence? He wants to become a doctor his family insist that he study law. 1. It is a run-on 2 It is a comma splice 3 It is a dangler 4. It is a fragment
Answered By: justaskscott-ga on 24 Aug 2005 21:17 PDT
Hello fully, This is a run-on sentence. There are two independent clauses in this sentence, which are not properly joined. The first independent clause is "He wants to become a doctor." The second independent clause is "his family insist that he study law." (Incidentally, there is another grammatical error in this sentence. The second clause should be "his family insists that he study law.") The error can be corrected "by adding a conjunction with a comma" or "by separating the two clauses with a semicolon." "fused sentence" ["Grammar" section] Answers.com http://www.answers.com/run-on+sentence In this case, the error can be corrected by rewriting the sentence as: He wants to become a doctor, but his family insists that he study law. or He wants to become a doctor; his family insists that he study law. For explanations of the three incorrect answers to this question, see: "comma fault" Answers.com http://www.answers.com/comma+splice "dangling modifier" Answers.com http://www.answers.com/topic/dangling-modifier-1 "sentence fragment" Answers.com http://www.answers.com/sentence+fragment - justaskscott Search strategy -- Searched on Google for: run-on sentence comma splice dangler sentence fragment
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From: myoarin-ga on 25 Aug 2005 04:18 PDT
"his family insist ..." In British English, sometimes it is acceptable to use the plural form of the verb with a singular subject that represents a group, suggesting that the various individuals in the group are acting. But don't ask me for another example. Maybe "Parliament are debating ...", on the logical feeling that a singular entity cannot debate.
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