Please proof read the following job application letter:

Dear Mr. XXXX  
  
The application of Warehouse Supervisor
I wish to apply for the above-mentioned position posted at
CareerTimes. I am particularly interested in joining IDS Logistics
(Hong Kong)Ltd ,which has over 25 professional Logistics management
experience.

I gained full-time working experiences in logistics industry. In 1999,
I was a full-time Accounting Clerk, which helped me to have business
acumen. Being a full-time Export Sales and Shipping Coordinator, I
needed to contact the UK and India based clients; and work in Mainland
China sometimes.

Currently, I am working in Expeditors Hong Kong Limited as an
operation assistant in Distribution Centre; I have learned how we can
earn the profit by providing innovative logistics services at minimal
cost. I have to be a good leader to deploy the warehouse manpower to
achieve maximum productivity.

Regarding education, I have been awarded the degree of Bachelor of
Science in International Shipping and Transport Logistics with Second
Class Honours (Division 1) at the Hong Kong Polytechnic University in
2003.

My ability to analyze problems from different angles was improved by
studying at the Australian Maritime College in Australia. I was
awarded the ?SPEED scholarship? of the Hong Kong Polytechnic
University for this exchange programme. My student exchange experience
gave me the opportunity to meet the people of different nationalities
and learn how to deal with the people from different cultures. My good
communication and interpersonal skills was developed.

I am currently studying my Master degree in Global Supply Chain
Management. I believe my further Master education, which focuses on
the Supply Chain management, is appropriate for the position.

I do promise I could make a positive contribution to IDS Logistics
(Hong Kong) Ltd. I would like to have a chance to discuss my career
plan with you in the interview. Your consideration is appreciated. My
phone is: 975xxxx.

Yours sincerely

xxx

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Re: Warehouse Supervisor position


Dear Mr. XXXX,

I wish to apply for the position of Warehouse Supervisor, which I saw
posted on CareerTimes. I am keenly interested in joining IDS Logistics
(Hong Kong) Ltd., which has over 25 years of logistics management
experience.

I have ample working experience in the logistics industry. In 1999, I
was a full-time Accounting Clerk, which gave me business acumen. Being a
full-time Export Sales and Shipping Coordinator, I needed to contact UK-
and India-based clients, and occasionally to work in mainland China.

Currently, I am working at Expeditors Hong Kong Limited as an operation
assistant in the Distribution Centre, where I have learned how to raise
profits by providing innovative logistics services at minimal cost. I
have also learned leadership skills in order to deploy the warehouse
manpower for maximum productivity.

As for my education, I earned the degree of Bachelor of Science in
International Shipping and Transport Logistics with Second Class Honours
(Division 1) at Hong Kong Polytechnic University in 2003.

I improved my ability to analyze problems from different angles through my
studies at the Australian Maritime College in Australia. I was awarded the
SPEED Scholarship by Hong Kong Polytechnic University for this exchange
programme. My student exchange experience gave me the opportunity to meet
people of different nationalities and to learn how to deal with people
from different cultures. Furthermore, I developed strong communication
and interpersonal skills.

I am currently pursuing a Master's degree in Global Supply Chain
Management. I believe my continued education at the graduate level is 
appropriate for this position.

I am confident that I can make a positive contribution to IDS Logistics
(Hong Kong) Ltd. I would like to have a chance to discuss my career
plans with you in an interview. My phone number is: 975xxxx. I appreciate
your consideration.

Yours sincerely,

xxx

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